Testimonials

“Natalie's editorial eye is among the best. From her in-depth understanding of plot, character, and worldbuilding, to her meticulous eye for detail, she is, truly, a master of craft. In working with her, not only are individual stories I've written better, but my overall ability as a writer is much improved. I wholeheartedly recommend working with her, and am thankful for her expertise.”

Ayana Gray, NYT Bestselling author of Beasts of Prey

“Natalie’s chapter critique was everything I could have hoped for and more. Not only did she identify a few of my weak points, she talked me through them in our video chat. I was able to take her notes and apply them to my entire manuscript. I know that I’m a stronger writer because of her. Another thing she helped me with was my starting point. I had started my story in the wrong place and we were able to talk through alternate beginnings and rearrange my opening. I highly recommend her. You go in for a chapter critique, but you come out with a stronger craft.”

Angelica Monai (Hunt a Killer: Perfect Score releases Spring ‘22 from Scholastic)

“Natalie is amazing! I’m so happy I sent her my Pitch Wars chapters. She offered insightful feedback and she was so sweet and helpful throughout the whole process. I would definitely recommend her services to a friend!”

Skyla Arndt (now represented by Claire Friedman of Inkwell Management)

“I scored a free editing package in a giveaway from Natalie right before Pitch Wars. Her feedback on my submission materials for the contest was incredibly helpful, thorough, and kind. I think her edits levelled up both the material she read and my writing skills overall, thanks to her clear explanations. I then purchased another package for a second book I was about to trunk after an unsuccessful querying process and her comments, along with our editing call, were just as insightful and helpful. Long story short, the first book was selected for Pitch Wars mentorship and the second one will be published as my debut novel this year. Hire her, she's fantastic!”

Erin Fulmer (Cambion’s Law releases 2021, from City Owl Press

“Natalie's feedback helped me approach my work from different angles and ask myself questions about my writing that I hadn't yet considered. Her straightforward notes and advice were invaluable to me in revising my manuscript. Working with her was a lovely experience that I would recommend to anyone looking for a highly skilled, personable editor with very affordable rates.”

Maya Ameyaw (now represented by Lesley Sabga and Julie Gwinn of the Seymour Agency)

“Natalie was honest without being brutal, expertly and carefully backing up her suggestions with explanations that were both convincing and encouraging—even if they were extensive. She was open to constructive discussion and was totally transparent both before and throughout the process regarding timelines and work method. I was never afraid to ask for clarification if in doubt, and I always looked forward to hearing the feedback. She even identified specific problem areas and pointed me in the direction of tools to use in the future. I felt in very safe, knowledgeable hands the whole time! 110%!”

Amalie Frederiksen

"Natalie’s editing services have been absolutely invaluable for me. She helped me see where I have been stumbling in my manuscript and gave clear and concise suggestions on how to make it better. Her critique is completely straight-forward, honest, and constructive, and not only is my manuscript much stronger because of her editing services, but also my writing itself."

Kelsey Mickailyk

“To anyone considering purchasing Natalie’s services, it’s definitely worth it! I purchased the silver package from Natalie in December 2020, and she was SO helpful when it came to shaping up my first three chapters. She gave me the push I needed to fix a few issues I thought might be there, and also pointed out a few things I hadn’t noticed at all. Her written notes were extremely helpful, and our later conversation was invaluable, as it helped me to brainstorm changes I could make in response to what she had suggested. To conclude: Natalie is the real deal. It can be hard to choose who you want to pay to review your writing, but after working with Natalie I genuinely feel like my first three chapters are a lot stronger. In a query market where it’s difficult to make yourself stand out, Natalie can definitely help with your opening pages!”

Ruby Martinez

“Natalie really helped me understand deeper POV and through her comments and edits I felt as if I was getting a lesson on writing closer to the character. It was wonderful to have a follow up video call, not only is Natalie super kind and understanding but she truly answered all my questions with details and gave me resources to learn more.”

Sara Kapadia (now represented by Naomi Davis of Book Ends Literary)

“Natalie's critique was focused, insightful, and illuminated issues I would never have seen on my own. Her feedback on pacing and world building was invaluable, and her enthusiasm when brainstorming plot improvements was a delight.”

Ren Kath

“Natalie gave me some important feedback about my opening chapters that I had heard before but ignored (not wanting to kill my darlings). Her suggestions for improvement were very concrete and so obvious now in hindsight. I can't believe I didn't make these revisions earlier! I strongly recommend using her services before querying (as I wish I had done!).”

Danielle Koehler

“Before submitting to Natalie, I knew there was something missing in my writing, but I couldn't figure out what that was. Natalie honed in on the problem in the opening pages and her suggestions and comments helped me see the flaws in my work and sparked ideas on how to fix them. Working with Natalie really gave me the insight and confidence I needed to make my novel stronger.”

Ruona A.