So You Want to Work With #TeamSaltHalo...

Welcome to #TeamSaltHalo! We are Natalie Crown and Angelica Monai (think Monét like the painter - my mom was fancy on the spelling), and this is our first time mentoring for Pitch Wars. We’re accepting manuscripts in the YA category and are open to New Adult, but expect us to age it down.

Writing Tips - Observations from Critiquing

Rhythm is also important for creating or aiding whatever emotion you want the reader to be feeling. For example, are you writing an action scene? Intersperse your prose with short, sharp sentences. Is your character on the verge of an emotional breakdown? Write long sentences with run-on clauses to convey that their mind is working at 100 miles a minute.

Chapter Critique Service

Three manuscripts later, I’ve learned so much as a writer, but also about the industry. There’s a tiny bridge between ‘not far off’ and ‘ready’ but it’s a difficult bridge to cross, and you need to be committed and fearless.

Revise & Resubmit

Revise and resubmit notes don’t mean a quick edit. They mean you tear it all up and piece it back together again. They mean you make major changes, you kill your darlings, and adapt your ideas.