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Writing Tips - Observations from Critiquing

Rhythm is also important for creating or aiding whatever emotion you want the reader to be feeling. For example, are you writing an action scene? Intersperse your prose with short, sharp sentences. Is your character on the verge of an emotional breakdown? Write long sentences with run-on clauses to convey that their mind is working at 100 miles a minute.

Revise & Resubmit

Revise and resubmit notes don’t mean a quick edit. They mean you tear it all up and piece it back together again. They mean you make major changes, you kill your darlings, and adapt your ideas.